Sophie Davis Essay Question

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I'm currently a rising senior and this is a program that I am extremely bent on getting into, as it would be the only way that I could even get into medical school. My financial situation is tough, and there is no guarantee that I would even be able to afford to go through the traditional pre-medicine route in a regular undergrad. To put it into perspective...if I can't get into the Sophie Davis program, I will have to settle for colleges like Brooklyn or other CCNY schools, because I simply cannot afford anything better. Plus, this is the only BS/MD program that I could find that would even consider (I think?) a "less than stellar" applicant such as myself. I am very interested in going into primary care, and the three essay's (except the first topic essay) pretty much revolved around my commitment to primary care, and how I can relate to the people who are currently living in undeserved areas that are in dire need of physicians. Unfortunately, based on my ACT test scores alone, I'm not sure I'll even be given a chance. T_T Anyway, here is a little more about me (I'm basing this on the "what are my chances" threads I've looked at earlier)

Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Hispanic (half of my cousins live in Venezuela)
Average: 93.85 unweighted (around a 3.75 GPA, I've kept it consistent throughout high school)
Class Rank: School does not rank unless colleges need it for scholarship considerations or something like that (that's what my guidance counselor told me lol)

SAT's: 1660 (590CR, 480M, 590W, 11 essay)
SAT II's: They're abysmal. I won't even go into those.
ACT: 26 Composite (retaking in September. Thank you ACT test dates )

Regents (grades that I remembered, anyway):
-Living Environment (9th grade...I didn't really care back then): 82
-Earth Science: 85
-Intergrated Algebra 2 w/ Trig: 75 (and that was from trying my best...if you guys couldn't tell already, I'm horrible at Math)
-Regents ELA: 100
-Regents US History and Gov't: 99
-Regents Phy Set/Chemistry: 79 (retaking in August for a 90+)

I take IB classes instead of AP. IB classes are like AP, but supposedly they're more harder and some are even offered in 2 years instead of one. Meh, I don't really know more about that. My school only offers AP Euro, since the other AP's were replaced with IB's.

Classes taken this year with final grades:
-Chemistry Honors: 88
-Chorus: 99
-IB English HL I: 90
-IB History of the America's: 92
-IB Psychology SL: 92 (gonna find out my IB exam grades on the seventh)
-Integrated Algebra 2 w/ Trig: 85
-Health Education: 90 report card was torn, leaving me clueless about the second

Senior Schedule:
-IB English HL II
-IB History of the America's HL II
-IB Physics
-IB Living Environment
-IB Math Studies
-Anatomy and Physiology
-Sports Medicine
-Team Sports

And the WISE Internship as well. I'm planning to intern with a Neurosurgeon (the school has been able to get Neurosurgeon's before).

-Honor Roll Grades 9-10
-High Honor Roll Grades 10-11 (and hopefully senior year)
-Health Achievement Award - Grade 11
-5 year National Roll for Piano Guild

EC School Activities:
-Chamber Singers grades 9 and 11
-WISE Internship - Grade 12 (this is planned)
-NYSSMA Grades, All "outstanding", grades 9-11
-Volunteered at the library for the whole summer of my freshman year

Out of School EC's:
-Pianist for 15 years
-Martial Artist, Red/Black stripe ranking - 8 years
-Hospital Volunteering at the Emergency Department - Grades 11-12 (planning to keep up with it senior year)
-200+ hours shadowing various doctors including a Cardiologist and an Anesthesiologist
-Piano Guild Participant - 5 years
-Pianist at the nursing home - Grade 9
-Returning pianist at winter and summer recitals for the Brookville Reformed Church (yes, this means I live on Long Island, but I am far from "rich" or even "middle class") - 10 years
-Youth Group at the Glen Cove Christian Church

Letters of Recommendation:
-Guidance Counselor
-Piano teacher of 15 years
-The Anesthesiologist I mentioned earlier wrote me one, and my guidance counselor said that it was awesome.
-My Chemistry Honors teacher
-My AP Euro teacher from 10th grade

They're all in and ready to go.

-Photographer's assistant - Summer of 2008
-Auto body repair assistant - Summer of 2009

*Well that's pretty much my whole story up until this point. I know my grades are not stellar, but I am hopeful that my commitment to various extracurriculars and my essay's will be more...'loud' than what my grades say. I know that I'm not the best student, but I have always been passionate about everything that I have done, even though some results may have been less than "stellar". But nonetheless, I NEED TO KNOW if I stand at chance. Should I even apply?*

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